Tips for Creating Sentences That Flow Unknown 23:01 creating sentences that flow , Jodie Renner , Jodie Renner Editing , sentence structure , Style that Sizzles and Pacing for Power by Jodie Renner, editor & authorIn my book, Fire up Your Fiction, I give lots of tips with before-and-after examples on topics like avoiding style blunders, picking up the pace, fixing awkward phr... Read more » 09Mar2013